Our field trip was really a helpful wander

Our field trip

By: Khane Kits C. Launio, Apr. 7, 2016

We had a field trip. We visited the Municipal Hall first. We saw extraordinary things wich was being used by our municipal workers. We even saw the offices of the only one Hon. Edna C. Tabanda, Hon. Romeo K. Salda and councilors. Next place we went was to the La Trinidad Fire Station. We saw fire trucks. One of our schoolmate was said to be a volunteer. We also saw helmets, jackets and boots. The people their showed us how do they do their work when their is fire. Another place we went was Valley Bread. Valley bread was huge! Their were a lot of workers. Next thing we saw was machine including bread tower. I was shocked when I saw all the machines. Last place we went was Pro-Cor. It was excitingly wide. We went to their camp where we ate our food. After eating, we had a tour around. After going place to place, finally we went back to the place where we ate our food. Their they showed us different types of guns. After that, we went back to school. Our field trip was really a helpful wander.

(Khane's unedited homework essay after their field trip. Again, not bad Khane, except the many erroneous "their" that should be "there". The other errors are forgivable. Good job. - Mama)